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麻烦帮我看一下有什么语法错误,大概还有什么地方需要改进.(是用于口语中!)MyhometownisaninlandcitybestknownforrollinghillsandtheconfluenceoftheYangtzeandJialingRivers.IsupposethefirstfeatureIwoulds
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  麻烦帮我看一下有什么语法错误,大概还有什么地方需要改进.(是用于口语中!)

  MyhometownisaninlandcitybestknownforrollinghillsandtheconfluenceoftheYangtzeandJialingRivers.IsupposethefirstfeatureIwouldsayinmyhometownisitsgorgeouscityscape,especiallythenightscene.WhenIstantattherelativelyhighmountain,Ialwaysastonishedfromthisview.Also,thelighttrailswidlyusedinmyhometown.Isupposeitisaveryconvinenttransportoolanditcanhelppeoplesavedmuchtime.Anothersiginificantcharacteristicisthatthedeliciousfoodattactsatonsoftouristslikethehotpot.Besides,Ialsobelievethecolorinthiskindoffoodmayrepresentsthelocalpeopleofhotpersonality.

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  1.bestknownfor"the"rollinghills   2.I"believe"thefirstfeatureIwilldescribe"in...(supposerepresentsakindofuncertainty,notsuitableforthissituation)   3.whenI"stand"(wrongspellinghere)"onthehillandoverlookthecity",I"am"(shouldhaveaverbhere)alwaysastonished"by"theview.   4.also,lighttrails(nothe)"are"widlyusedinmyhometown.不知道你用lighttrail是指的什麼,似乎没有这种交通工具,改用tram/train比较好.   5.ibelieve/think(notsuppose)itisaveryconvenient(wrongspellinghere)"transportation"anditcanhelppeoplesave(shouldusebareinfinitehereafter"can")muchtime.   6.Anothersiginificantcharacteristic"ofthecity"isthedeliciousfoodwhichattracts(changethepatternofthesentence,buttheoriginalsentencehasnothingwrong)...   7....Ialsobelievethestyle(notcolor)of(notin)thiskindoffoodmayrepresentsthelocalpeopleofhotpersonality.   仅供参考,自己衡量衡量要不要全部或部分采用.
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2020-08-01 02:07:48
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